Hi,
Both these sources are copyright. Do you have permission to use them in OSM?

Added note.
Please wait a while for your changes to take effect on the default map .. it can take some days.

Hi,
The grass area (way number 983550302) has 2 problems;

has areas tagged as trees - in cannot be both tree and grass .. chose one.

the name suggests the area is a reserve ... and it should be tagged as a reserve not a grassland?

See way/983550302#map=17/-37.68420/145.13250

Hi,
Multipolygon outer ways cannot share segments.

In this case I have combined the 2 ways into one simple way. Then transferred the relation tags to the way ... and then deleted the relation.

Hi,

The parking areas don't extend to teh center of footpaths - should be drawn as a separate way.
When added please observe any existing amenity=parking so the feature is not duplicated.

Hi
The Morven recreation ground, .. umm what sort of football is played there? Bit hard to make out from imagery. Rugby?

Trick...
it was tagged as an outer .. when it should have been an inner (or the other way around) ... I think I fixed that .. just human error.. and we all fall for that from time to time. If you come across it again - check the roles of the connected ways.

One relation outer way cannot touch an outer way of the same relation. Note - same relation.

I have used a single way as a member in several relations with the role outer, some state borders with council borders and national parks borders .. so at least 5 things all using the same way. Within any of those relations no outer way shares a node or segment with another way in that relation - other than where ways join together to make a single boundary.

That help? Might make things more confusing - apologies if so.

Hi,
Only one 'landuse=grass in this changeset - relation/13777531/history I don't see any other features here... certainly the individual ways have no tags.

The OSM key 'natural' is not well named! "Used to describes natural physical land features, including ones that have been modified or created by humans." ... so even 'man made' things can use the key 'natural'... See natural=*

Note my inclusion of landcover=grass. I think this is a more logical tag - say what it means without any extra explanation - at least to english speakers.

Hi,
Why is it necessary to create the landuse=grass? No inner holes in it.
And then it is a large area .. the OSM wiki for landuse=grass says "A smaller area of grass, usually mown and managed."
I have combined the ways into one way, tagged the way natural=grassland and landcover=grass and then deleted the relation.

Hi,
The 'Mental Health Unit' multipolygon is not correct.
Multipolygon outer ways cannot touch other outer ways .. See https://tools.geofabrik.de/osmi/?view=areas&lon=150.71350&lat=-33.76054&zoom=18

In this case I would draw one outer way around the outside of the entire thing. Then draw the inner ways.

area=yes on way/1035904925 makes no sense. tag deleted.

area=yes on Way: 1035904926 make no sense. The way does not need to be included in the tree multipolygon and can simply be tagged as a tree area.

I think you have used Maxar imagery for some of this, this is probably the most upto date, use the DCS for fine detail (resolution).

Hi,
Tag conflict!
Both
barrier=kerb
kerb=no

???

Hi,
Jogging could be done along any foot path.

What makes this path have special features for jogging?

Is not jogging a form of running?

Hi,
The relation/14050392 for a residential area is not closed. See https://tools.geofabrik.de/osmi/?view=areas&lon=149.65283&lat=-32.73739&zoom=6

Some other comments? (nit picking)
The changeset comment 'updated map of palmwoods' looks to be generic? Possibly better as 'naming residential areas of Palmwoods'? See osm.wiki/Good_changeset_comments

The residential are does not go to the road centre. The road, its verge and foot path are landuse=highway, so the residential are is set back from the road.

Hi,
Welcome to OSM!!

The combined tennis and basketball court ... I prefer to map these individually as 2 separate things .. they overlay one another but that is what they do. For example see way/459026975#map=18/-33.76416/150.69128

I do hope you have stopped mapping leisure=pitch as more that the playing area of the sport... in this case I think the Bowls Club was better mapped as sports centre.. alternate landuse=recreation_ground.

Opps, that is Kalamunda, Perth, WA!

Please don't use LIST ... it is copyright and should not be used for OSM. Other image sources have copyright waivers for use with OSM.

Hi,
What is the source of this address?